one thing about the phoenix, though: i found that sims didn't demonstrate well enough why the people in her novel did certain thing. one that sticks in my mind is how kit's friends disliked nick. but, i never read anything that would explain that. apart from that, though, everything else was enjoyable.
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Date: 2007-03-12 09:54 pm (UTC)and yes, those balls were a bit too large....
one thing about the phoenix, though: i found that sims didn't demonstrate well enough why the people in her novel did certain thing. one that sticks in my mind is how kit's friends disliked nick. but, i never read anything that would explain that. apart from that, though, everything else was enjoyable.