ext_6913 ([identity profile] bloodrebel333.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] erastes 2006-07-28 09:53 pm (UTC)

What's AWOL? (silly english terms)

(Not that I had a choice, but I liked to make it sound like I was. "It's good money, I'll give you that. We need it. I've only one more question. Where are you taking them?"

After "like I was", you need to add a bracket, I believe.


For the rest, I liked it. :)

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