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Aug. 29th, 2007 05:00 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
erastesARGH!
Change of First Person Voice. I'd been writing my suburban stockbroker for a few months now and then I paused to write something in a very wordy Regency style - also first person. Now I've decided to go back and started to write the stockbroker again... he's coming out with overrunning convoluted fancy schmancy sentences.
GO AWAY, GEOFFREY YOU WORDY BUGGER, YOU'VE HAD YOUR TIME IN THE SACK!
I suppose the best way to exorcise him would be to re-read everything I've written on the novel so far? Anyone else had this problem?
