royalties and cut!
Aug. 17th, 2009 11:05 amRoyalties fluctuate so bloody much – I’m assuming this is because of all the different booksellers that publishers sell to, and the different rates each one offers or something, but I can’t but help being very confused. For example – for one bookseller I earn $1.11 royalty per book sold, which is nice, then I see that I’ve sold 95 copies to another seller – get excited because that should be $100 – and then find I get a TOTAL of $25. This seems bloody bizarre. And WRONG.
One of my favourite blogs, Rachelle Gardener, has a blog post this morning about effective ways to cut word count – some of the advice is:
Here’s a checklist of things to consider cutting:
→ Adverbs, especially those with “ly” endings. Ask yourself if they’re necessary.
→ Adjectives. Often people use two or three when one or none is better.
→ Gerunds. Words that end in “ing.”
→ Passive voice: Over-use of words like “was,” "were" and "that" indicate your writing may be too passive. Reconstruct in active voice.
→ Passages that are overly descriptive.
→ Passages that describe characters' thoughts and feelings in too much detail (i.e. long sections of narrative or interior monologue).
→ Passages that tell the reader what they already know.
→ Unnecessary backstory.
Oops. That makes Mere Mortals about 200 words long. Flash fiction anyone?



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Date: 2009-08-17 11:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 11:39 am (UTC)The End.
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Date: 2009-08-17 12:09 pm (UTC)Their luggage is lost.
They make do.
Hijinks.
the end.