utterly exhausted
Apr. 11th, 2004 02:57 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
erastesits 2.51 - but i've finished chapter 16. and considering i'd been stuck on chapter FIFTEEN for two months, i cant tell you how happy I am.
It still needs a lot of work, and may even end up as two seperate chapters, and it needs more graphic sex descriptions if it will eventually please a publisher but its done. i can flesh it out later. 2501 words of Transgressions today and 200 words of HP which don't count. oh you want a snipette. difficult without giving stuff away.
David didn't move, he risked a look at his "match." It was still smouldering slightly and he blew on it frantically, trying to do it as quietly as he could. He knew he would get one shot, and only one chance. He stepped forward and ducked down as the expected shot went wide and clipped the tree, spun round and went to hammer the match down on the firing pan and stopped dead.
It still needs a lot of work, and may even end up as two seperate chapters, and it needs more graphic sex descriptions if it will eventually please a publisher but its done. i can flesh it out later. 2501 words of Transgressions today and 200 words of HP which don't count. oh you want a snipette. difficult without giving stuff away.
David didn't move, he risked a look at his "match." It was still smouldering slightly and he blew on it frantically, trying to do it as quietly as he could. He knew he would get one shot, and only one chance. He stepped forward and ducked down as the expected shot went wide and clipped the tree, spun round and went to hammer the match down on the firing pan and stopped dead.
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eep!
Date: 2004-04-11 09:59 am (UTC)Re: eep!
Date: 2004-04-11 10:29 am (UTC)