A Footman Called Carefully or writing: ur doin' it rong

[erastes]

“Oh, you’ll probably find him perfect,” Myles said in an undertone, watching our attending footman, carefully

and

I thought to myself

I reasoned to myself

I vowed to myself

SHEESH. next he'll be picking things up with his fingers. Or walking on his feet.

Comments

[suebrownstories.livejournal.com]

You do know you have to write that book now?

My latest story is overwhelmed with men behaving like five year olds. One has to ask why as they are doing 'not things suitable for children'.

[suebrownstories.livejournal.com]

Oh dear, I'm tired. My comment doesn't make sense.