AM DISGUSTED!!! with the editing! It ruins the piece completely.
"What a child he's."
"I wait in the dark, like the patient thing I'm."
ARGH!!!
so many mistakes! Nearly everywhere I have put "I am" (because Magnus is an old vampire and speaks more correctly, uses less declinations, they've shortened it and its rubbish! am so cross!!!
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Date: 2004-11-24 05:12 am (UTC)"What a child he's."
"I wait in the dark, like the patient thing I'm."
ARGH!!!
so many mistakes! Nearly everywhere I have put "I am" (because Magnus is an old vampire and speaks more correctly, uses less declinations, they've shortened it and its rubbish! am so cross!!!
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Date: 2004-11-25 02:05 am (UTC)