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This book surprised me. I'd been considering buying it for a while, but as I had so many historicals I wanted to review (and knew that I couldn't do this one on Speak Its Name) I kept putting it off, even though the reviews I'd seen had been praiseworthy.  So when a kind friend sent me a copy I jumped in eagerly.

The writing impressed me from the first "The night hung in tatters.  Gas streetlamps chewed at the darkness. Candles cast dull halos through the dirty windows of the tenements.." as it thrust you immediately into the world, and without even knowing where you were, you could see it, feel it, smell it. So many "helpful" authors pooh-pooh the descriptive narrative as a waste of time, but I'm an immense fan. Anything that starts with lush description is going to sucker me in.

What I liked most of all, though, is that the writer doesn't talk down to her readers - this world isn't ours - or if it is, it's very dangerously different - but she doesn't spend pages info-dumping the societal arrangements and political structure on us, and I appreciated that immensely.  I have read a good few fantasy and sci-fi books where there's so MUCH information in the first few chapters that I just throw the book across the room because there's too much set up and no STORY.  This starts in our protagonist's house and the author drip feeds us details with such delicacy that we are hardly aware that we are being told more about the world, because it is all by now, part of the plot.

The Americanisms put me off a little, only because the world seemed so very AU English - but I put that behind me; this city could be anywhere, in a world where "gotten" stayed as a term of speech. It's not our world. Crowncross is not London.

Belimai Sykes is one of the best protagonists I've read for a long while, drug-addicted, bitter - living in world that neither accepts him nor wants him, but cannot openly act against him. I've said before that I chose not to "see" him as the illustration on the front showed him - but that's a personal choice, you may - you may not. When you find out what happened to him, it makes his position all the more pitiful. He's talented, but frail - powerful in his own way, but he's no Mary Sue - he's ham-strung and living in fear, and part of that is fear of living.  I warmed to him immediately. Who needs heroes?  However, there's seemingly a hero on his doorstep. Captain William J Harpert - the strong, virile, handsome and "perfect" Inquisitor who interrupts Belimai's life and helps to rip it apart.  I say perfect because, like Belimai - Harper is a man who is also beset with his own troubles, can say no more without spoiling you.

The book itself is officially two novellas, one leading on from the other with the plot leeching from one to the other.  The first story (Mr Sykes and the Firefly) belongs to Belimai, the second (Captain Harper and the Sixty Second Circle) is Harper's.  I found that I enjoyed the second less than the first-perhaps because it was in a very different POV, and I prefer the dark place that is Belimai's head.

However - the main reason that I liked this book - with its intriguing Theocracy that we only learn a very little about, the Prodigals, Hells Below and the fascinating and mysterious Nicholas Sarial (with his past connection with Belimai) - is also the reason why I came away screaming in frustration.  I'm the last person to beg an author for a sequel, as I know how irritating that can be if you've written all you need to write about your characters' stories. But SURELY Hale can't leave her readers like this? I'm quite convinced that I'm not the only one who wants to know more about this world, these characters.  This - to use a comparison - is like having George R R Martin's Hedge Knight - with all the hints of the Seven Kingdoms, but for some reason, George never wrote "A Song of Ice and Fire".  These novellas are like an addition to some huge saga that's already been written, a tantalising glimpse into a much larger world - and all I can hope is that Hale is writing that saga as we speak, because I will be first in line to buy it. 

A big thumbs up and a most decided four stars.more please.....

Excellent Review!

Date: 2007-12-28 12:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blake-fraina.livejournal.com
I agree with all you've said 100%! Well, except for the fact that I gave it the full five stars. Like you, I always hate all that lame sequel talk people engage in everytime they enjoy a novel, but this book might benefit from a prequel...maybe. She could even use the same set-up - two short novels telling Belimai and Harper's stories before they met. I don't know. Maybe I'm grasping straws because I enjoyed the characters so much and just want to spend more time with them.

I have one question for you. How did you picture the prayer engines and what, exactly, did they do? Either I missed something or the author [wisely] left it kind of vaguely sinister.

Date: 2007-12-28 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zehavit-lamasu.livejournal.com
This sounds really good (and I don't mind americanism... or anachronisms... *is horrible like that* >__<;;). I am going to get a copy and give it a go.

I saw the book floating around amazon but never thought of buying it so thank you for the review ^_^

Date: 2007-12-28 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erastes.livejournal.com
I think it will be right up your street actually, steampunk and (from the illustration of Belimai on the front and on the authors website) girlybois!)

Re: Excellent Review!

Date: 2007-12-28 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erastes.livejournal.com
I only marked it down a notch because I liked the second story less, it's still a good book, however annoyingly short I found it!! :) And the trouble is that the story is pretty complete too. But I must know more about Belimai's past for a start, the way he tried to infiltrate his way into society with nail bleach and business cards - and his relationship with Nicholas. And who the prodigal ARE!! so many questions!

I would imagine that the prayer engines are no more and no less than instruments of torture with very sharp knives. I don't think I want to know!! eep!!

Date: 2007-12-28 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anderyn.livejournal.com
I read the excerpt on the author's site and now must have this book! It is definitely interesting to see how she sets up the conflict in such short time.... (I do read "steampunk" so this will be a laignappe (however you spell that!).)

Date: 2007-12-28 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zehavit-lamasu.livejournal.com
Hahah - steampunk and efeminate bishies - sounds more and more like my wet dreams ^_^;; .

Date: 2007-12-28 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leebenoit.livejournal.com
Couldn't agree more! This was one of the most richly imagined books I read in 2007, and I hope for more from this author. Prequel, sequel, new story in this universe, doesn't matter to me, I'll read it. It seems to me having built such an intriguiing society and cosmology, Hale would explore it fully; and if, as is indicated on the author's web site, a Tarot deck is in the works based on this universe, then it seems the author's deeply committed. Which pleases this reader immensely.

Date: 2007-12-28 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erastes.livejournal.com
blimey - what's a laignappe!!?

Date: 2007-12-28 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anderyn.livejournal.com
It's an extra -- like the 13th donut in a "baker's dozen"? It's from French, but in America, the concept is tied to Louisiana/New Orleans.

Date: 2007-12-28 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erastes.livejournal.com
Isn't it marvellous? It impressed me so much that she'd created this enormous world, it was obvious that she knew exactly how it was all set-up, how it all worked - what layers it had.

AND THEN didn't even tell US! That floored me.

Loved it, loved it.

Date: 2007-12-28 07:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alex-beecroft.livejournal.com
Ooh, this sounds fascinating! Add me to the chorus of people complaining that you're emptying their pockets with all your recommendations ;) I've just ordered 'Master of Seacliffe' after seeing it on 'Speak its Name'. So this one will have to wait until next week! But I totally agree with you about description. I'm getting seriously p-d off with hearing people recommend a thin, bloodless, grammar-school style of writing where everything is sacrificed to the plot. Sometimes you *want* to be able to wallow in the world, as well as following the story.

Date: 2008-01-03 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leebenoit.livejournal.com
::nods::

Some authors who are good at world building either fail to set a good story in their worlds, or are so enamored of the world itself they can't quash the info dumping. I was very impressed by her restraint and talent.

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