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[erastes]

Gah. It's porn, erastes. It's a short porn story. It ain't the Pulitzer prize. You don't have to explain who Carl is. This isn't a time for in depth characterisation and flowery prose.

You just need to get him to strip off and wave his cute Latino body at the hulking muscled bound prisoner on the bottom bunk. *points*

Now go wave! *pushes him*

Comments

[eroticjames.livejournal.com]

Yeah, but not helpful when you're trying to come in at under 10k words...

[fleurrochard]

Ah, yes, that might be a problem. And this is why I usually prefer longer stories - enough space for snark andsmut! ;-)