Editting with Eratses

[erastes]

The bank stretched a distance along the bank

hmm – perhaps that's because it was a bank?

sat at a table that could seat 20 at least, looking as pale as china.

a china table! delicate!

 

And I have an expanding character – he starts out as

Myles Graham was a little more slight than Jude Middleton,

and then later!

Myles was, as his clothes had hinted, of a broader build than Jude

it must be the good Norfolk air that does it.

Shoot me. please.