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[erastes]

Myles metered out his own brand of natural justice.

By the yard, do you think?

 

and

Jude continued to claw at Philip’s close

this is obviously a body part I haven't heard of!

Also, we have amazing transporting dinghies which move from riverbank to boathouse without any seeming intervention!

Comments

[chris-smith-atr.livejournal.com]

Is Philip a ken doll?

[chris-smith-atr.livejournal.com]

Or maybe he is wearing iron knickers?

[anteros-lmc.livejournal.com]

Philip’s close
this is obviously a body part I haven't heard of!

No, no. Philip lives in Glasgow. His close is the communal hallway leading to his flat. I have no idea why Jude is clawing at it though...

[erastes.livejournal.com]

Philip's Close! Yes! Perhaps that's where Carefully lives.

[anteros-lmc.livejournal.com]

By Jove I think you're right! Carefully lived at Philip's close before he was done in by Albert the tattooing valet!

[cass1969.livejournal.com]

LOL I love these little updates!

[erastes.livejournal.com]

I feel such an idiot!

[cass1969.livejournal.com]

But it gives hope to us lesser writing mortals!

[lee-rowan.livejournal.com]

Are you using that speech-to-text system? That would explain a lot...

[erastes.livejournal.com]

I wish I could use that excuse. I think my mind just works faster than my fingers when i get in the groove of writing.